Good essay starts with a good thesis statement. This is the
starting point of your writing journey. Quite puzzlingly, thesis statement
often is the most challenging part for many students – to the point where they
need paper writings support to
cope with this issue. In this short piece, I will try to dispel any difficulties
you might have had with it.
What is thesis statement?
Thesis statement is usually one sentence that summarizes your
position in the argument and appears near the beginning of your essay. When you
write an essay, you exercise in academic argument – a specific kind of
persuasion, but persuasion nonetheless. You need to convince your readers in
your point of view. This point of view should be crystallized in one or two sentences,
which actually are the sacramental statement.
Why you need a thesis statement?
That’s pretty intuitive. You need it to construct your
argument. What are you arguing for/against? You cannot proceed further without
this. There is a trick to battle writer’s block that I’ve seen often in many
guides to writing a good essay – and that is to start right from the middle and
leave introduction and conclusion for the later. That makes sense; however, the
thesis statement is vital. You should at least have some working version of it
outlined before you start writing.
However, it isn’t something that you come up with right
after you have read the assignment. You need to do the research, collect and
organize facts, look for connections between them. As a result of this thinking
process, you will have an idea that you will be able to support with facts.
How do you come up with thesis statement?
To come up with a relevant thesis statement you can answer
the question that was asked in the prompt. For example, "Did Internet kill the
romance?" or "Is privacy more important than security?"
If there is no clear question and you were invited to take a
stance or make a claim about the subject provided, then you should give your
interpretation that others may dispute. If you state facts that no one would or
possibly could disagree with, this is not a thesis statement but background
information.
To check if your thesis statement is in any way disputable,
apply the "so what?" test. If after reading your thesis statement a reader
might ask themselves "So what?", you need to elaborate your statement further,
clarify it or add some connections to a larger issue.
Step-by-step
For example, your assignment asks you to write an analysis
of some aspect of Margaret Mitchell’s Gone
with the Wind and you think: "Great! I loved the novel and I can write a
ton about it!" Then you sit down and write your thesis statement:
Gone with the Wind is
a great novel about crucial changes in American history.
Is this a good one? Not really. The essay following such
thesis is probably going to be a lengthy detailed summary of the novel.
However, you were asked to analyze it. Furthermore, you must analyze some particular aspect. Think further
and try to pick one theme or symbol that is important to the novel’s structure
or meaning. For example, the contrast between characters: Rhett vs. Ashley,
Scarlett vs. Melanie? How are they different? What key characteristics are
contrasting? Maybe, unyielding principles vs. adaptability? Then you might come
up with something like the following:
In the Gone with the
Wind Margaret Mitchell shows how different characters demonstrate contrasting
attitudes towards great changes.
That is already better. This can be a starting point for
your analysis, so this thesis will do as a working one. As you work further,
you see what those contrasts tell us about life, about American history, about
social changes. Once you’ve explored those meanings, you can deepen you thesis
statement:
Through contrasting
characters Margaret Mitchell shows the decline of tradition in the post-civil
war South and its struggle to adapt to the new way of life.
Now that’s a thesis statement that complies with the
assignment prompt and promises some in-depth analysis following it.